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Individual project #2, A different ending

INDIVIDUAL PROJECT #2, DIFFERENT ENDING


Hello everyone one, welcome back to my blog.
So everyone, today I will choose one of the fictional stories in the e-reader.
I will read the story I will choose later and make a different ending to the story



I chose                 : The prince and the servant
Author                  : Jane rollason
Lever                    : A2 Elementary
Word count          : 1803
Number of page   : 7 page
Link                        :https://english-e-reader.net/book/the-prince-and-the-servants-jane-rollason




In olden times one far country was ruled by a lazy and greedy queen. She had a beautiful daughter. Many kings and princes wanted to marry her, but the queen always gave them difficult tasks. When the suitors for the princess were unable to cope with these ordeals - she killed them without mercy. This had been going on for a few years. She wanted her daughter to never get married. Prince Charles lived in a small poor country. When he heard about the princess, he told his father that he wanted to marry her. the king was against it. in the world there were many other beautiful woman. and the evil queen killed every groom. but the young princee got upset. he could not sleep and eat. finally the king let him go on this dengerous mission.Prince Charles began his journey and on his way he met the fat man, big ear,long arms, quick eyes and cold man. Prince Charles made them his servants. When he arrived at the palace, the prince met the queen and said he wanted to marry his daughter.The queen also gave 3 difficult challenges to Prince Charles. but Prince Charles completed the challenge with the help of his servants.When the queen knew she had completed all the challenges she had been given, the queen could not do anything about it and let Prince Charles marry her daughter.Because the queen lost to Prince Charles, she decided to leave the country. The princess married Prince Charles and they lived happily and the good servants also stayed Together with them.

---- The End -----

What do you think about the ending ?. 
Now I will try to change the ending of this story


when Prince Charles completed the challenge, the queen decided to leave the country. but Prince Charles stopped her and said "stay with us" The queen replied "I have made you miserable by giving you that challenge, do you still want to forgive me for what I did to you?" "You are his mother, you do it all because you love your daughter" Prince Charles replied to the queen. The queen was crying and regretting her actions, the queen went to apologize to the family of the person she had killed. they lived together, and the good servant also lived in the palace with them.
-----the end-----

So everyone, what do you think about my ending story?

I hope you like my ending story







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